Redux

After further discusion and feedback, we tried to rework our current western idea. An issue that kept cropping up was that it wasn't clear weather our actors were acting as a nervous/clumsy/cocky character, or actually were clumsy. The characters true personality and their acted personality were in constant conflict, and consequently keept canceling each other out. HOWEVER, all is not lost. After a 45 minute brain storming session after class, we've decided to go down a whole new route, with hopefully some genuinely funny results. I'll leave our rough mind map from the session here for now, but more will follow shortly...