New animatic and Colour Script

Right, chopped and re did the beginning on peoples suggestions, and also drew up a nifty colour script. I still think the colour script is lacking some what, a bit too, bright, over saturated, lacks depth. I'll tweak it tomorrow. Also, I managed to get hold of all the production music used in cartoons like Ren and Stimpy (which I've been watching way too much of since I acquired the DVD box sets...), and more recently SpongeBob Squarepants, I just had to use it in the animatic...

Looking good! But tomorrows class feedback will ultimately decide where to take it from here...

And the colour script.